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                                                  Some broken hearts
                                                    Will love again,
                                                  Some fractured minds
                                                 Watch sun-rise, and mend,
                                                  Some happy dreams
                                                 Are cherished by friends,

                                                 Because you have love,
                                                  You will triumph again


                                                  Some broken hearts
                                                 Hiss: 'Love is unwise',
                                                  Some fractured minds
                                                 Fall silent and die,
                                                  Some happy dreams
                                                  Are muddied by lies,

                                                 Because I am lost,
                                                  I will never know why.
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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Writer
I remember former Miami Dolphins football coach Don Shula saying he does not let failure in life consume him. Learn from the defeat and come back better next time a better person.
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I have heard that name before, and now I respect the man for his statement. Thanks for putting that out there.
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Deepizzaguy Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
Don Shula was a former National Football League coach for the then Baltimore Colts now the Indianapolis Colts. He is the only National Football League coach in history to coach an undefeated and untied football team. The 1972 Miami Dolphins who went 17-0. He was the coach of the then Baltimore Colts that lost to the New York Jets in Super Bowl III. I was eight years old at the time of Super Bowl III and I do not remember that game. But I do remember the 1972 Super Bowl.
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vattersay Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
your a man of many tallents,keep it up.....
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ChameleonGiant Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
such majestic words.
iv been awe struck...
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MickeyFebruary Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Excellent!
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9heartdNeko Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very profound.
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Galacia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful! Love this so much.
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ancientfire33 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
It is gorgeous, simply woven but able to convey so much emotion...

Just beautiful!
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Aphose Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.
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KellyP4everMi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
amazing I love it!
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youcanhavemyheart Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love the rhymes. very beautiful & admirable :)
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Queen-of-Sneaks Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have no words to describe the excellence of this piece.
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limeheer Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
second half all the way
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tatiana3222 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is really deep.
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evinca Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful. That's all I need to say.
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phoenixsoftball4 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
That's deep, DUDE
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ShannonSharpie Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thats really pretty hun.
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lilfixit Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I feel like I've read this before...but I think this version was a bit better.
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broken-and-whole Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
This is an absolute beautiful poem
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Kinthinia Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the flow and format, as well the meaning itself so simply put but very well done
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BlazingFeathers22 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Truth told in in pretty, succinct words.
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mannu1410 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
praise worthy
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HorrorKitten337 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very good, I like it. Also very true.
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rhgraphicsolutions Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
because we never will know why! good poem!
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